Shock the Monocle →
• ∞
So you’ve mastered it’s vs. its — and you try not to use dashes too much. You’ve learned that the passive voices has its uses; you’ve learned how to build sentences and paragraphs with parallel construction; you’ve learned to use the Oxford comma.
You’re aces in my book.
But there’s this one thing — you’re still using comma splices.
(via Benjamin Brooks)